Beauty and the beast (minisaga)

Once upon a time there lived a pretty girl named Belle who lived with her father. One day he was to go to a far-off place and on his way back he found a huge castle and he saw a beautiful rose for Belle. He stole it and the beast appeared.

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2 comments

  1. Lucía, I fixed two little mistakes and put that in italics (cursiva). Check it out. I think there’s one extra word now, then. Perhaps you can cross out “pretty”, or any other, of course. Or reword something. Whatever! 🙂 ❤ Have a lovely hol!

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